Topic: Jane Austen Internet Musical Adventure

I have something new. I'm very curious to know what any one here thinks of my latest film production.  This is my first venture into writing musical theater.

It's a one hour long Internet MUSICAL Version of Jane Austen's "Sense and Sensibility" hosted by Jane herself.  The show runs one hour and covers the entire book.  My hope is that a few of you will find it entertaining enough to see the entire opus.

Please let me know what you think.

https://youtu.be/7YMiQoVQmOY

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Hi Paul,

Not much response so far!

That is an interesting concept, and was well done. Obviously a lot of effort went into it. Not being a Jane Austen fan I don't find that story very interesting, but I expect many will. It's a pity she does not ever look at the camera when speaking. Would it be possible for the stage curtains to be open to show the characters suitably posed? Not actually moving and acting, but maybe the singer also lip synced? That would obviously involve a lot more work!

The music is OK, and the lyrics witty and good. Well done.

Geoff

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GB wrote:

Hi Paul,

Not much response so far!

That is an interesting concept, and was well done. Obviously a lot of effort went into it. Not being a Jane Austen fan I don't find that story very interesting, but I expect many will. It's a pity she does not ever look at the camera when speaking. Would it be possible for the stage curtains to be open to show the characters suitably posed? Not actually moving and acting, but maybe the singer also lip synced? That would obviously involve a lot more work!

The music is OK, and the lyrics witty and good. Well done.

Geoff

Thanks Geoff for watching.  You're a prince!   What you suggest is very doable.  All that's needed is a talented art department to create the images.  I toyed with the idea of asking an A.I. image generator to create images of the characters.  That possibility is still out there.  Lip syncing the characters is also very possible.   But I liked the idea of reading the titles, to clearly get the story points.  Sometimes singers can't be understood -- and to me every word is important.  I wouldn't want to give up on the titles.  But maybe I'll mess around a bit when I recover from this effort. 

Paul

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But I liked the idea of reading the titles, to clearly get the story points.  Sometimes singers can't be understood -- and to me every word is important.  I wouldn't want to give up on the titles.

Yes, I agree completely. Being able to read the words being sung was excellent and should be retained.

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I’m sorry to come to this discussion so late, but I didn’t want to watch only five or ten minutes of the video before commenting, and until now various distractions got in the way of my watching more than that at one go. I’ve now watched the entire show, half last night and half this morning.

What an astounding piece of work, Paul! I’ve never read the book and I’m pretty sure I’ve never seen a movie version from beginning to end, so although I’d previously encountered the names of the principal characters I’d only been vaguely familiar with a few bits of the plot. That shortcoming has now been corrected in the space of a hugely enjoyable couple of half hours.

There are inevitably the odd few typos (e.g. “ring her neck” at 41:28 and “that villian Willoughby” at 53:42) and the name Ferrars is misspelled in three different ways (Ferras, Ferris, and Farras) but that can easily, if somewhat tediously, be fixed by going through the whole thing with the proverbial fine-toothed comb.

"I am ignorant of absolute truth. But I am humble before my ignorance, and therein lies my honour and my reward.”
— Kahlil Gibran

Re: Jane Austen Internet Musical Adventure

Alfred wrote:

I’m sorry to come to this discussion so late, but I didn’t want to watch only five or ten minutes of the video before commenting, and until now various distractions got in the way of my watching more than that at one go. I’ve now watched the entire show, half last night and half this morning.

What an astounding piece of work, Paul! I’ve never read the book and I’m pretty sure I’ve never seen a movie version from beginning to end, so although I’d previously encountered the names of the principal characters I’d only been vaguely familiar with a few bits of the plot. That shortcoming has now been corrected in the space of a hugely enjoyable couple of half hours.

There are inevitably the odd few typos (e.g. “ring her neck” at 41:28 and “that villian Willoughby” at 53:42) and the name Ferrars is misspelled in three different ways (Ferras, Ferris, and Farras) but that can easily, if somewhat tediously, be fixed by going through the whole thing with the proverbial fine-toothed comb.

Thank you Alfred and others for the comments.  HIGHLY APPRECIATED.  I realize the length was a problem. But I did this for fun -- and I got a lot of fun out of it.  It was a pleasure working with Jane Austen.  It was really a trip into Regency England where one didn't move, but removed. 

There are other typos and goofs.  Easily fixed when I'm in the mood.  Right now I'm plunging ahead with a second Jane Austen story, Pride and Prejudice. 

We had house guests so I've been off line lately.  Thanks again everyone.

Re: Jane Austen Internet Musical Adventure

GB wrote:

But I liked the idea of reading the titles, to clearly get the story points.  Sometimes singers can't be understood -- and to me every word is important.  I wouldn't want to give up on the titles.

Yes, I agree completely. Being able to read the words being sung was excellent and should be retained.

GB -- I struggled with retaining the titles or trying something more interesting.  Conclusion was to stick with the titles.  Jane Austen is actually right, her original books required that you "read" them -- and use your imagination to visualize the story.  It's kind of like a radio show?  Thanks for your comments.

Re: Jane Austen Internet Musical Adventure

GB wrote:

Hi Paul,

Not much response so far!

That is an interesting concept, and was well done. Obviously a lot of effort went into it. Not being a Jane Austen fan I don't find that story very interesting, but I expect many will. It's a pity she does not ever look at the camera when speaking. Would it be possible for the stage curtains to be open to show the characters suitably posed? Not actually moving and acting, but maybe the singer also lip synced? That would obviously involve a lot more work!

The music is OK, and the lyrics witty and good. Well done.

Geoff

Curious.  Did YouTube play any commercials inside the Jane Austen piece?

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Did YouTube play any commercials inside the Jane Austen piece?

Very likely, but I don't remember. If they keep YouTube free, I'm prepared to put up with them. I just click Close Ad as soon as it appears. The same thing happens with commercial TV, but then you can't close them down!